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There are three reasons why I agree that children having smart phones is a good idea. The first reason is we can communicate with people by using kakao talk, facebook and instagram. Children can keep in touc with their freinds and family. Second, we can search the internet for help.

It is faster and more convenient than searching through books. It is very comfortable and convenient to use smart phones to take pictures, record video, and listen to music/class CDs. Smart phones are very useful for children. I think children should have them.

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