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                                                                          Korean rules

When visiting Korea it is important to avoid being impolite or rude. Below you will read about some behaviors to avoid and some rules to follow. First, staring at people is rude. Because it makes people feel uncomfortable and nervous. Do your best not to stare at someone. Second, talking loudly on the subway is very impolite. Because people don't want to be disturbed, hear your conversation, or music. You can cover your mouth and speak softly when talking to someone and please use headphones. Third, not using two hands when giving someone something is rude. It's extremely disrespectful to others. It is important to give money or things with two hands. Fourth, pointing your finger to people is also rude. People don't feel good. Lastly, you must cover your mouth when you cough. Because it is dirty and people don't want to be covered with your germs. If you are sick, please wear a surgical mask. Let's follow these rules and be good to one another.

                                                                          Smart phone

There are many advantages of having a smart phone. First, we can communicate with it such as by calling SMS, and Kakao. We can talk with our family, and friends in a very convenient way. Second, we can use the Internet. For example, we can get a lot of information like what words mean, sports scores and celebrity news. If there weren't smart phones, we would have to use a dictionary and a newspaper. Third, it can be used for education. It can help us memorize English words and study math. Fourth, there are a lot of useful apps. We can download these apps from the Play store and the App store very quickly. There are map apps, internet apps, game apps and communication apps like Kakaotalk. Without smartphones, out lives would be very uncomfortable.

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