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[How energetic she is]

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Recently, my mom took a quiz about how energetic she is.The quiz asks questions about how active you are.Based on how you answer, you'll be

in one of four categories.The four categorie is lazy, very energetic, not lazy but not active and really active.My mom got 14.That means she's not

   lazy but not active.The first reason is she has been spending a lot of time on her cell phone.She uses her cell phone for internet shopping,

 searching and reading books.She has been on her cell phone for more than an hours a day.The second reason is that she's been watching too

   much TV.She's been watching too many dramas.The third reason is she doesn't get much exercise.She has been doing less than an hour of

    exercise a week.It's because she likes to relax.I would like my mother to get a better score and be an active person.These are three way that

she can be more active.THe first way that she can be more active is to stop watching TV.The second way is to get more exercise.Lastly, if she

doesn't be on her phone so much.she can get more things done.I hope my mom gets a higher score next time.

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